Author Topic: Villetta 4  (Read 2612 times)

2018-05-04, 14:52:47

mutilo

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Hello guys,
this is my last external made with C4d and beta 2 of Corona with a touch of PS.

I ask for your help to improve me and make it even more realistic if it is.

thanks, see you soon.

Andrea

2018-05-06, 16:07:52
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Jack

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how come.. the trees are so green and there are leaves on the ground like in fall season...)   
and one more thing.. tropical plant doesn't match the broadleaf maple trees...
« Last Edit: 2018-05-06, 16:12:09 by Jack »

2018-05-06, 16:43:49
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very poor materials, for all leaves needs to add translucency. asphalt is too reflective for that mood, why autumn leaves
 when all greens?

2018-05-07, 09:15:29
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mutilo

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how come.. the trees are so green and there are leaves on the ground like in fall season...)   
and one more thing.. tropical plant doesn't match the broadleaf maple trees...

thank you.
let's pretend that the leaves on the street are there for a while, for what they are dry. Because of the fact that the tropical plant can not be with the others I do not know, where I live there are pines, palms, oaks ... so I thought there could be.

thank you
Andrea

2018-05-07, 09:19:03
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mutilo

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very poor materials, for all leaves needs to add translucency. asphalt is too reflective for that mood, why autumn leaves
 when all greens?

Thank you.
I'm working on the materials, I know they are not the best .... but I try and try again ... For the leaves is the same as before, I assumed that the leaves on the street had already dried.

Thank you.
Andrea

2018-05-07, 16:04:35
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apjasko

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Use reference photos when creating scenes. If realism is what you're after, study how the light interacts with objects and materials. Then replicate it.

Also work on composition. In my opinion, the composition itself has a very "3d feel" to it.

2018-05-07, 17:12:53
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mutilo

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Use reference photos when creating scenes. If realism is what you're after, study how the light interacts with objects and materials. Then replicate it.

Also work on composition. In my opinion, the composition itself has a very "3d feel" to it.

Thanks for your suggestions

2018-05-09, 18:31:38
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mutilo

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