House Xerex

[melviso]

My latest work using Corona 1.0. I textured the models using 3dsmax viewport canvas and photoshop. Any criticism is welcome.

[melviso]

Fixed some things and added some stuff and re-rendered.

[melviso]

No comments at all. I would really appreciate any feedback so I can learn from them. If there is anything u feel should be improved on. Pls kindly let me know.

[PROH]

Hi melviso. I think the last image is overly contrasted, in a very artificial way. So just wondering.. is this intended, as an "artistic" approach?

[melviso]

Not at all. If it looks artificial. I probably should get some of the black out. It looks too dark now that u mentioned it. I am trying to achieve photorealism though I have noticed betrand benoit's images tend to have a darker contrast.Thanks for your critic,PROH.

[kehlje]

The tree trunks in foreground aren't doing you any favors... remove that big one. the grass also looks like its scaled super big. the view composition is nice and safe but it could be a bit more dynamic. the lighting is nice! :)

[melviso]

Thanks kehje. changed the grass completely