Author Topic: Erbil Medical Rehabilitation Center  (Read 2584 times)

2018-01-30, 18:37:25

sarkawt

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Erbil Medical Rehabilitation Center
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2018-01-30, 23:32:08
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mferster

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Neat light streak effect. But I really don't think they help to serve the visualization of the building, they are super distracting.

2018-01-31, 00:47:03
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Noah45

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The H2O color effect is nice, maybe a tighter crop would 'sell it'. ?
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2018-02-01, 10:26:15
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I have no real experience in archviz, but I thought that a rehabilitation center should be pictured as cozy and friendly, and this one here looks a bit "apocalyptic" with this dramatic lighting and clouds. :)
But maybe this was the idea, or client's request?
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2018-02-01, 14:05:16
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sarkawt

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yes it was required by Client

2018-02-01, 20:18:45
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I agree with mferster, the light streaks are too much. You dropped the clients model into Evermotion's AE28 Scene 1, right? That's all I notice when I see it.

If there's that kind of long exposure, there should be some motion blur form the cars. Much less intense light streaks and blurred cars would help with the focus of the image.

2018-02-05, 06:28:21
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Alex Abarca

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Maybe you can post one that suits you. I am curious how you envision the project vs. what the client wants.