Author Topic: House in nature  (Read 8024 times)

2015-12-16, 14:44:32

bryanwrx

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Title: House in nature
programs used: 3dsmax, corona, growfx
description: a personal project I did in my free time..hope u like it :)

2015-12-17, 07:06:52
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very nice. fog look great. but i have a suggestion, can you please desaturate green value little bit.

2015-12-17, 12:02:40
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some brutal quick levels + hue saturation
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2015-12-17, 12:21:23
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bryanwrx

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 it doesnt look realistic with that much lightning even the raw is dark cause by the surrounding trees blocking the lights.

A lighter version here just for the lolz



2015-12-17, 12:22:25
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i must admit, that i like the op's Version more than yours Maru. The mood is somehow better with this deep dark tones. IMO

2015-12-17, 14:45:22
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No problem, that was just a suggestion/idea. I guess it depends on the goal mainly - is the image intended to express something? sell the house? show some features? build atmosphere? ...
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2015-12-17, 15:36:03
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very nice renderings.. thanks for your work. can you mention about the grass material and what kind of displacement map/settings ? Thank you.

2015-12-17, 15:40:15
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I kinda like it. Reminds me of this photos I had as wallpapers some time ago..

https://flic.kr/s/aHsk7dBBbG 
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2015-12-17, 16:22:24
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@ylucic yeah i went for a dark moody scene like a house deep in the forest away from everything..is like u are alone with nature hehe

2015-12-18, 08:18:58
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Nice mood & I like the lighting; reminds me of a forest I used to go to as a kid. =] At first glance a critique would be that I feel the textures/materials could use some refining; particularly the forest floor & near flora. There's a slight plastic appearance to the leaves, which is often apparent in Vue renders. Perhaps some bump/added thickness, and couple other tweaks would help.  Anyway, good scene!


2015-12-18, 16:02:50
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bryanwrx

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thnks vantiel for the critiques :)

2015-12-18, 16:09:46
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Just as idea quck collorgrading
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2015-12-18, 18:17:39
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@nekro too much warm feeling in a cool place for my liking..I went for a dark coolness scene to highlight the essence of an building situated deep in the forest :)

2015-12-19, 13:47:50
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The green glow in the first render hurts the eyes a bit and in the lower right corner of the second render the bump seems to extreme (Image 1). Other than that, it looks really good.
I'm a fan of adding blue to nature scenes, so I'm really happy to see a render that screams colder colors and chill.
I hope you have enough time and horse power to crunch through the noise.
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2015-12-21, 10:37:34
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some brutal quick levels + hue saturation

Even if these adjustments kills some of the mood (arguably) the results are much more realistic, and the green hues are better / look more real.