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omaranbar@gmail.com:
Corona 3d rendering for cargo planes.

burnin:
Nice attempt, but...
1&2 - Lighting doesn't fit (observe how light falls over the object and where the lights sources are in the image) - also take care of reflections, know the surface planes have.
3 - Scale is off (take warehouse elements in relation to the plane's elements - seems quite a small plane ;)
4 - That background, can you recognize the perspective - either clouds are off or the plane is flying extremely sideways... wouldn't wanna be on :D

Disregard my comment, if you can't see it... but keep up the spirit!

omaranbar@gmail.com:
Thanks for your comments.

gpz:
it needs more reflections.
i know that is 'too much'..but look at this work.
https://www.behance.net/gallery/38125547/Airbus-A350-900
https://www.behance.net/gallery/42934287/A350-900

GpZ

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