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AnubisMe:
As much as I like doing exterior work here is a interior I designed.

CC welcome

AnubisMe:
no comments?

Geezer:
Hi,

1. Lighting looks flat / light side - shadow side?

2. Too much yellow tint from bounced light

3. Textures / shaders are also too simple

4. Composition cloud be better if you want to stay with a 1pp image.

5. Too much variation going on with the plants

6. work more on the styling

I know it is a wip image but these were the things I observed.
Hope you dont mind and will be able to push the scene further.

maru:
Well, honestly, it doesn't look very bad and doesn't look very good. Lighting isn't bad. When you unzoom it looks ok. Now about the flaws:
-looks like you used displacement on the chimney bricks, it looks like the side faces are detached from the rest of it
-the fire doesn't look good... it's too dark and contrasty and lacks transparency
-the area where palm leaves are against very bright background - not sure if it's image compression but it looks too "crispy"
-the image looks slightly overexposed but it's ok if it's intended
-ugly (low res) background image

fire3d:
Overall, nice room, for a better look:

Plants lookin ..... äh ..... dunno, there's no life in the plants, the plant pot's have no "feeling - Window frames are a little bit to shiny,
the stonewall looks way to flat, also the fireplace is not deep enough, the look out of the windows is to clear
and to bright

otherwise a nice idea/concept

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